What do you think is the best sport in the world? Explain your choice.
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I think the best sport in the world is football(soccer) because football is famous, and I like it. (＾ω＾)
Also football is easy for every enjoy.
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What do you think is the best sport in the world? Explain your choice.
I think the best sport in the world is football(soccer) because football is famous, and I like it. (＾ω＾)
>> OR: I think the best sport in the world is football or soccer because it\'s famous globally, and I love it.
Also football is easy for every enjoy.
>> Also, football is easy for everyone to enjoy.
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