What do you think is the best thing to do to contain the virus and prevent it from spreading?
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Humans are having a difficult continuously because of new disease which is occurred by viruses. In the past, a lot of people died due to infectious disease like the smallpox and the Black Death. Also now, humans are being damaged by new infectious disease called the Corona19.
Not only humans but also animals can be damaged by viruses. Even, viruses can sometimes infect between species’. For example, the Bovine Spongiform Encephalopathy(BSE) is occurred to cows. However, if people eat a cow which have the BSE, they have a disease called Creutzfeldt-Jakob disease(CJD) which is a type of BSE.
The best way to prevent infectious disease is to kill the host of viruses. If there are no hosts, viruses can’t live anymore. So, people kill animals which have a infectious disease to prevent spreading.
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Humans are having a difficult continuously because of new disease which is occurred by viruses.
>>Humans are having difficulty continuously because of new disease which is occurred by viruses.
In the past, a lot of people died due to infectious disease like the smallpox and the Black Death.
>>In the past, a lot of people died due to infectious diseases like the smallpox and the Black Death.
Also now, humans are being damaged by new infectious disease called the Corona19.
>>CORRECT!
Not only humans but also animals can be damaged by viruses.
>>CORRECT!
Not only humans but also animals can be damaged by viruses.
>>CORRECT!
Even, viruses can sometimes infect between species’.
>>CORRECT!
For example, the Bovine Spongiform Encephalopathy(BSE) is occurred to cows.
>> For example, the Bovine Spongiform Encephalopathy(BSE) occurred from cows.
However, if people eat a cow which have the BSE, they have a disease called Creutzfeldt-Jakob disease(CJD) which is a type of BSE.
>>However, if people eat cows which have BSE, they have a disease called Creutzfeldt-Jakob disease(CJD) which is a type of BSE.
The best way to prevent infectious disease is to kill the host of viruses.
>>However, if people eat cows which have BSE, they have a disease called Creutzfeldt-Jakob disease(CJD) which is a type of BSE.
The best way to prevent infectious disease is to kill the host of viruses.
>>CORRECT!
If there are no hosts, viruses can’t live anymore.
>>CORRECT!
So, people kill animals which have a infectious disease to prevent spreading.
>> So, people kill animals which have an infectious disease to prevent from spreading.
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