What do you think is the best thing to do to contain the virus and prevent it from spreading?

2020-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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With an apedemic of Covid-19 worldwide, there are a lot of recommendations on the news or internet to contain and prevent the virus. So, I would like to say some tips that I\\\'ve known from articles about that. First of all, the most important thing to do is making a distance between person and person. Because this virus is spreading by droplet or aerosol. Therefore, it is better to keep your contact as low as possible with others. Secondly, if we meet other people, we have to wash our hands frequently. It helps us to erase the virus immediately. Thirdly, we have to wear a mask as possible as we can at every single day. If there’s no choice to avoid the circumstances that we meet other people, we have to block the droplet not to spread out. A mask could be a good solution. Finally, if we have some symptoms like cough or fever and so on, we must directly go to the selective care center for Covid-19. Because this virus has very strong spread power even the symptoms are very weak.

강사 첨삭

Thank You Ms. [이름]!
~Lucy

With an apedemic of Covid-19 worldwide, there are a lot of recommendations on the news or internet to contain and prevent the virus.
>>With the pandemic of Covid-19 worldwide, there are a lot of recommendations on the news or internet to contain and prevent the virus.
 So, I would like to say some tips that I\\\'ve known from articles about that.
>>So, I would like to say some tips that I\'ve known from the articles about it. 
First of all, the most important thing to do is making a distance between person and person.
>>CORRECT!
 Because this virus is spreading by droplet or aerosol. 
>>CORRECT!
Therefore, it is better to keep your contact as low as possible with others.
>>CORRECT!
Secondly, if we meet other people, we have to wash our hands frequently. 
>>CORRECT!
It helps us to erase the virus immediately.
>>CORRECT!
Thirdly, we have to wear a mask as possible as we can at every single day. 
>>CORRECT!
If there’s no choice to avoid the circumstances that we meet other people, we have to block the droplet not to spread out.
>>CORRECT!
 A mask could be a good solution.
>>CORRECT!
Finally, if we have some symptoms like cough or fever and so on, we must directly go to the selective care center for Covid-19.
>>CORRECT!
 Because this virus has very strong spread power even the symptoms are very weak.
>>CORRECT!

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