What do you think is the best time for a kid to sleep? Explain.
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I think the best time for a kid is 9 o\'clock because At that time, a lot of growth hormones come out and if sleep late, doesn\'t grow tall
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What do you think is the best time for a kid to sleep? Explain.
I think the best time for a kid is 9 o\'clock because At that time, a lot of growth hormones come out and if sleep late, doesn\'t grow tall
>> I think the best time for a kid to sleep is at 9 o\'clock because at that time, a lot of growth hormones come out, and if sleep late, I grow tall.
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