What do you think is the best TV show and why?

2022-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I have to say It\'s the Infinite Challenge at MBC broadcasting station. It\'s a program where famous comedians like Yoo Jae Seok and Park Myoung Soo come out. When I was young, I used to watch it a lot on every Saturday. but there are some members who did drink to drive and to gamble. so It\'s not airing right now.

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Hi Elic!

I\'ve never seen that show before. It sounds very interesting. I\'ll look it up.

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I have to say It\'s the Infinite Challenge at MBC broadcasting station.
>> I have to say it\'s the \"Infinite Challenge\" at the MBC broadcasting station.

It\'s a program where famous comedians like Yoo Jae Seok and Park Myoung Soo come out.
>> CORRECT

When I was young, I used to watch it a lot on every Saturday.
>> CORRECT

but there are some members who did drink to drive and to gamble.
>> Although there are some members who did drunk driving and gambling so the show is not being aired right now.

so It\'s not airing right now.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.

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