What do you think is the best TV show and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, the best TV show is a news.
Thanks for a news, we are able to get the information about nowadays situations.
Also we can have a right thought about something by debating each other base on the information.
Even a news could save a person\'s life.
A news could give the information very quickly, so it could save the people who are in danger.
Because of these reasons, I think the best TV show is a news.
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This is true. TV news programs are very reliable. They can give us updates about current events.
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In my opinion, the best TV show is a news.
>> In my opinion, the best TV shows are news programs.
Thanks for a news, we are able to get the information about nowadays situations.
>> Thanks to news, we are able to get information about current events.
Also we can have a right thought about something by debating each other base on the information.
>> Also, we can get facts about something by debating with each other based on the information shown on the news.
Even a news could save a person\'s life.
>> This can even save people\'s lives.
A news could give the information very quickly, so it could save the people who are in danger.
>> News could give information very quickly, so it could save the people who are in danger.
Because of these reasons, I think the best TV show is a news.
>> Because of these reasons, I think the best TV shows are new programs.
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