What do you think is the biggest blessing you have received in your life?

2020-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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The biggest blessing that I have received is my parents. My father gave me an opportunity to experience a lot of things in local and oversea countries. My mother likes to read books so she had a lots of background knowledges in various fields. Above all, most important thing is that they gave me much love during my childhood and even now that I\'m all grown-up.

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The biggest blessing that I have received is my parents.
>> The biggest blessing that I have received are my parents.

My father gave me an opportunity to experience a lot of things in local and oversea countries.
>>CORRECT

My mother likes to read books so she had a lots of background knowledges in various fields.
>>CORRECT

Above all, most important thing is that they gave me much love during my childhood and even now that I\'m all grown-up.
>>CORRECT


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