What do you think is the biggest change in how families are in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
1. The biggest change of families in Korea is a type.
2. Because the number of families is getting smaller.
3. We call this type of family a nuclear family.
4. A lot of people have lives with their grand-parents, but not now.
5. I don\'t know which one is better.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ian! Thank you for doing your homework. However, please take note that when writing an essay, you don\'t need to write a number for every sentence that you make.
- Debbie
>> The biggest change in Korean families is they are getting smaller.
3. We call this type of family a nuclear family.
>> We call this type of family nuclear family.
4. A lot of people have lives with their grand-parents, but not now.
>> A lot of people lived with their grandparents, but not now.
5. I don\'t know which one is better.
>> I don\'t know which is one is better.
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