What do you think is the biggest change in how families are in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
One person household is the fast growing type of families in Korea.
The most young generations will not get married.
They think that they have to take many responsibilities and have give up enjoying life for themselves because of the marriage.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Ms. [Name]! Yes, marriage does not seem to be a must for most people these days.
One person household is the fast growing type of families in Korea.
>>> correct
>>> OR: A [이름]gle household is the fastest growing type of family in Korea.
The most young generations will not get married.
The most young generations will not get married.
>>> Most young generations do not get married or have no plans of getting married.
They think that they have to take many responsibilities and have give up enjoying life for themselves because of the marriage.
They think that they have to take many responsibilities and have give up enjoying life for themselves because of the marriage.
>>> They think that they have to take many responsibilities and have to give up enjoying life for themselves because of the marriage.
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