What do you think is the biggest change in how families are in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
In Korea, nuclear family is increasing.
As agricultural system is lower, relatives don\'t need to live together.
And as companys are in verious cities, relatives are live in each city.
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In Korea, nuclear family is increasing.
>> Correct
As agricultural system is lower, relatives don\'t need to live together.
>> As the agricultural system is less prevalent, relatives don\'t need to live together.
And as companys are in verious cities, relatives are live in each city.
>> And since companies are located in various cities, relatives live in different cities.
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