What do you think is the biggest problem your country is facing?
학생이 쓴 원문
There are many problems in South Korea like the mortgage loans, interest rates and conflict between men and women. Among them, I can\'t understand the conflict why they hate each other. I wish we can understand each other to live well. However, It doesn\'t go well and that\'s not the reality.
강사 첨삭
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There are many problems in South Korea like the mortgage loans, interest rates and conflict between men and women.
>> CORRECT
Among them, I can\'t understand the conflict why they hate each other.
>> Among them, I don\'t understand the conflict on why they hate each other.
I wish we can understand each other to live well.
>> CORRECT
However, It doesn\'t go well and that\'s not the reality.
>> However, it doesn\'t go well and that\'s not the reality.
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