What do you think is the economic, social and financial impact of this pandemic?
학생이 쓴 원문
Miserable recession in every sector caused by COVID-19 is no more to say. All businesses have lost liveliness except for works on the internet. I hope that all gloomy circumstances would be gone with the vaccine, but this prospect seems to  be realized next year.
Moving onto the post-pandemic, can we recover our economy from all damages hurt by the virus, and can everyone be happy as much as before? In my view, most of us would overcome the difficulty, but this happening would accelerate the gap of wealth.
All economic activities would continuously move from offline to online where a winner takes all. Self-employed people have to compete with the other business owners living in different places. Many office workers should be identified their strengths compared to competitors living in foreign countries. A few IT giants like Google, Apple, Amazon would release their more powerful services and products originated from their astronomical assets that most domestic companies can’t achieve.
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Thank you [이름]!
~Lucy
Miserable recession in every sector caused by COVID-19 is no more to say.
>>CORRECT!
All businesses have lost liveliness except for works on the internet.
>>CORRECT!
I hope that all gloomy circumstances would be gone with the vaccine, but this prospect seems to be realized next year.
>>CORRECT!
Moving onto the post-pandemic, can we recover our economy from all damages hurt by the virus, and can everyone be happy as much as before? >>CORRECT!
In my view, most of us would overcome the difficulty, but this happening would accelerate the gap of wealth.
>>CORRECT!
All economic activities would continuously move from offline to online where a winner takes all. >>CORRECT!
Self-employed people have to compete with the other business owners living in different places.
>>CORRECT!
Many office workers should be identified their strengths compared to competitors living in foreign countries.
>>CORRECT!
A few IT giants like Google, Apple, Amazon would release their more powerful services and products originated from their astronomical assets that most domestic companies can’t achieve.
>>CORRECT!
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