What do you think is the hardest job in the world?
학생이 쓴 원문
All of the jobs are hard. But I think the hardest job is to be a parent. As I get older, I feel like I\'m taking responsibility for my family, feeding them, and going into society. But I won\'t be a mechanic of aircraft in my next life. :)
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Hi Elic!
Yes, being a parent is no joke. It\'s a really hard job but one of the most fulfilling.
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>> All jobs are hard but I think the hardest one is being a parent.
As I get older, I feel like I\'m taking responsibility for my family, feeding them, and going into society.
>> As I get older, I feel like I\'m taking responsibility for my family such as feeding them and earning a living for them.
But I won\'t be a mechanic of aircraft in my next life. :)
>> But I think I will not pick being a mechanic in my next life.
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