What do you think is the hardest job in the world and why?

2021-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I don\'t know all the jobs in this world but in my opinion, I think being a parent is the hardest job ever. I don\'t know anything about being a parent because I\'ve never been someone\'s parent. But if I am someone\'s parent, I have to do everything for him / her and I have to love him / her. Sometimes, it will be very hard to raise my children but I have to do because I am him/ her parent. So I think being a parent is the hardest job ever.

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Hi [이름]! ^^

Your answer is wonderful. Being a parent is really hard because you have to do thing unconditionally. Great job!

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I don\'t know all the jobs in this world but in my opinion, I think being a parent is the hardest job ever.
>> I don\'t know all the jobs in the world but I think being a parent is the hardest one. 

I don\'t know anything about being a parent because I\'ve never been someone\'s parent.
>> CI don\'t know anything about being a parent because I\'ve never been someone\'s. 

But if I am someone\'s parent, I have to do everything for him / her and I have to love him / her.
>> But if I was, I have to everything for that person and I have to love him/her unconditionally. 

Sometimes, it will be very hard to raise my children but I have to do because I am him/ her parent.
>> Sometimes, it will be very hard to raise my child but I need to be strong for him/her. 

So I think being a parent is the hardest job ever.
>> CORRECT

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