What do you think is the hardest job in the world and why?

2021-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think it is 𝒶 doctor. Because we want to become 𝒶 doctor, we have to study very hard and we enter the medical school. Moreover, doctors have to see something terrible.

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Hi [이름]! ^^

I don\'t understand your answer. What is a 𝒶 doctor?

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I think it is 𝒶 doctor.

>> What is a 𝒶 doctor?

>> I think it is being a doctore.

Because we want to become 𝒶 doctor, we have to study very hard and we enter the medical school.

>> If we want to become a doctor, we have to study very hard and we need to enter medical school.

Moreover, doctors have to see something terrible.

>> CORRECT

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