What do you think is the hardest job in the world? Explain your answer.
학생이 쓴 원문
I know that there are a lot of harder jobs than this, but I think an elementary school teacher is very hard job.
I didn\'t remember how I was able to understand my study, but I understood a lot of things in my elementary school.
So I know a lot of things, but it is hard to explain and make elementary school students to understand the study.
But my elementary school teachers made us to understand those things.
So I think elementary school teachers are really brilliant and it is really hard job
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Yes, you really need to have very long patience to be an elementary school student.
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I know that there are a lot of harder jobs than this, but I think an elementary school teacher is very hard job.
>> I know that there are a lot of harder jobs than this, but I think being an elementary school teacher is very hard job.
I didn\'t remember how I was able to understand my study, but I understood a lot of things in my elementary school.
>> CORRECT
So I know a lot of things, but it is hard to explain and make elementary school students to understand the study.
>> So I know a lot of things, but it is hard to explain and make elementary school students understand different lessons.
But my elementary school teachers made us to understand those things.
> But my elementary school teachers made us understand those things.
So I think elementary school teachers are really brilliant and it is really hard job.
>> CORRECT
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