What do you think is the importance of friendships?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear Teacher Sheila!
Hello~ I\'m Tony.
Teacher~
I had sometimes didn\'t understand listening and sometimes don\'t know what to say.
So I\'ll try to listening & speaking.
homework
What do you think is the importance of friendships?
(Today theme be pretty similar yesterday theme. ^^;)
I have a good friends. So my life is happy. good friend must be following an earnest effort.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Tony! It\'s okay. That is normal. Let\'s work more on your listening and speaking skills.
When you are having lessons with me, try to relax. I felt that you were nervous a while ago.
Don\'t worry about our lesson because I will be here to guide you always. :)
Until the next one!
See you in class! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila
>>Sometimes, I don\'t understand what I\'m listening to and sometimes I don\'t know what to say.
OR>>Sometimes, I don\'t understand what you say and sometimes I don\'t know what to say.
So I\'ll try to listening & speaking.
>>So, I\'ll try to listen and speak well.
I have a good friends.
>>I have good friends.
So my life is happy.
>>CORRECT
good friend must be following an earnest effort.
>>A good friend must be followed with earnest effort.
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