What do you think is the importance of having a good memory?
학생이 쓴 원문
Having a good memory with family through travel is the most thing in my life.
It makes my confidence, encourage and power of my daily life.
Having a good memory also gives us a sence of ease and staibilty sometimes.
Above all, getting rid of bad memory is the first order of our business.
Since It doesn\'t happen to come across to me, we have to tried to find it through reading a book.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Ethan!
Thank you for submitting your answer.
I totally agree about the importance of having a good memory.
I think keeping a good memory is the same with having a treasure in our life. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> Having a good memory with family through travel is the most important thing in my life.
It makes my confidence, encourage and power of my daily life.
It makes my confidence, encourage and power of my daily life.
>> It gives me confidence, encouragement and power for my daily life.
Having a good memory also gives us a sence of ease and staibilty sometimes.
Having a good memory also gives us a sence of ease and staibilty sometimes.
>> Having a good memory also gives us a sense of ease and stability sometimes.
Above all, getting rid of bad memory is the first order of our business.
Above all, getting rid of bad memory is the first order of our business.
>> CORRECT.
Since It doesn\'t happen to come across to me, we have to tried to find it through reading a book.
Since It doesn\'t happen to come across to me, we have to tried to find it through reading a book.
>> Since It doesn\'t happen to come across to me, we have to try to find it through reading a book.
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