What do you think is the importance of learning more skills in life, even if we\'re not in school an

2026-03-26 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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Well, I think it\'s a very philosophical and serious question. In my opinion, there is a lot about the importance of learning more skills in life, even if we\'re not in school anymore. First of all, you can learn many fellings that you can\'t learn at school. There are feelings that you can learn in school, but you can learn countless feelings that you can\'t learn in school, for example, the intesity of tiredness that is different from when you were in school Next, you will learn the reality of the world. Sometimes you\'re likely to learn the reality of a cruel world by confronting yourself. However, based on that, you will gain experience as you grow older, and that will be your own strength and benefit of experience and make you a better person.

강사 첨삭

Hi! 

Thank you so much for sending your essay. I sincerely appreciate it. I totally agree that learning continuously will eventually help us get through life and help us become stronger and better people. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina


Well, I think it\'s a very philosophical and serious question.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I believe this is a very profound question.

In my opinion, there is a lot about the importance of learning more skills in life, even if we\'re not in school anymore.
>> In my opinion, learning more skills in life has a lot of importance, even if we are not in school anymore.

First of all, you can learn many fellings that you can\'t learn at school.
>> First of all, you can learn many feelings that you cannot learn at school.

There are feelings that you can learn in school, but you can learn countless feelings that you can\'t learn in school, for example, the intesity of tiredness that is different from when you were in school
>>  There are some feelings you can learn in school, but there are countless emotions you can only experience outside of it. For example, the intensity of tiredness is very different from what you felt when you were in school.

Next, you will learn the reality of the world.
>> CORRECT.

Sometimes you\'re likely to learn the reality of a cruel world by confronting yourself. 
>> CORRECT.

However, based on that, you will gain experience as you grow older, and that will be your own strength and benefit of experience and make you a better person.
>> However, through these experiences, you will gain knowledge as you grow older, and this will become your strength and help you become a better person.

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