What do you think is the main reason that married people have divorce?
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These days a lot of married people have been divorcing all of the world.
There are countless reason when the couples are broken. But i think the main reason is the different of their personality. They lived as the way of their own thinking and under their own family's circumstance until they married.
But once they married then they have to understand each other and forgive their parter when they fight. It is not so easy.
If someone can not endure their parter's lifestyle then probably they can not continue their relationship.
We have our own character and values. Marriage is the life of adults so we have to think more deeper about our parter.
Also we have to have comprehension each other.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Derek!^^
Good job on expressing your ideas. It really sound very realitistic when it comes from
a married person like you!^^
Be very careful on using adjectives or nouns like comprehension and comprehend.
Also do not start a sentence with \"but\" not unless it a clause.
Look into my corrections today.
Thank you!^^
T.Debby^^
Review the sentence below:
These days a lot of married people have been divorcing all of the world.
>>These days a lot of married people have been divorcing all over the world.
There are countless reason when the couples are broken. But i think the main reason is the different of their personality.
>> There are countless reasons when the couples are broken but I think the main reason is the difference of their personality. They lived as the way of their own thinking and under their own family\'s circumstance until they married.
>> They lived by way of their own thinking and under their own family\'s circumstances until they are married.But once they married then they have to understand each other and forgive their parter when they fight.
>> But once they are married then they have to understand each other and forgive their partner when they fight. It is not so easy.
>> CORRECT
OR> It is challenging.If someone can not endure their partner\'s lifestyle then probably they can not continue their relationship.>> CORRECT
OR> If someone can not endure their partner\'s lifestyle then probably they can not cope up relationship.
We have our own character and values.
>> CORRECT
OR> We have different personalities. Marriage is the life of adults so we have to think more deeper about our parter.
>> Marriage is the life of adults so we have to think deeper about our partner.Also we have to have comprehension each other.
>> Also we have to have comprehend each other.
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