What do you think is the most beautiful song in the world? Why?
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I think the most beautiful song is \"They\'re all flowers\" because the song\'s lyrics are beautiful.
https://youtu.be/P9u5wxrHUvk?feature=shared
Even if it blooms in the mountains, it\'s a flower Even if it blooms in the field, it\'s a flower Even if it blooms on the streets, it\'s a flower
They\'re all flowers Even if it blooms anywhere Even if it blooms as it looks Even if it blooms with no names They\'re all flowers.
(^_^)
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Here\'s your revised homework. Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few and minor revisions made.
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Jean~~
What do you think is the most beautiful song in the world? Why?
I think the most beautiful song is \"They\'re all flowers\" because the song\'s lyrics are beautiful.
>> I think the most beautiful song is \"They\'re All Flowers\" because the lyrics are beautiful.
Even if it blooms in the mountains, it\'s a flower Even if it blooms in the field, it\'s a flower Even if it blooms on the streets, it\'s a flower.
They\'re all flowers Even if it blooms anywhere Even if it blooms as it looks Even if it blooms with no names They\'re all flowers.
>> CORRECT~~
>> NOTE: To be honest, it\'s hard to correct lyrics because they don\'t follow grammar rules.
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