What do you think is the most challenging thing about being an adult?
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Definitely, taking a responsibility is the most challenging thing that I think. [이름]ce I was born, my parents put up with everything like my act, sayings, and financial aid. But, when I became an adult, I took over that. Also, if I do something wrong, My parents could be criticized.
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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Definitely, taking a responsibility is the most challenging thing that I think.
>> CORRECT![이름]ce I was born, my parents put up with everything like my act, sayings, and financial aid.
>> [이름]ce I was born, my parents put up with everything like my actions, requests, and financial aid.
But, when I became an adult, I took over that.
>> CORRECT!Also, if I do something wrong, My parents could be criticized.
>> CORRECT!
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