What do you think is the most dangerous form of transportation? Why?

There are many transformations in the world: car, train, bicycle, etc. Actually, if we ride a bicycle or car or train dangerously, the possibility of occuring accidents will be higher. So, we should utilize those transformations precauciously. Of the many transportations, nevertheless, I strongly believe that a car is the most dangerous. First of all, In practice, the car accidents more often occur than other transportations and there are the most casualities from car accidents. We can see the news of car accidents more often than any other transportations; almost every day, car accidents occured, I think. Secondly, The reason for this is that bicycle cannot speed up as fast as a car while a car is easy to speed up. In addition, train or plain is not operated by drunken people, but a car can be control by the drunken; so, it makes the possibility of car accidents higher. For those of two reasons, I think that the most risky transportation is a car

Good morning Miss [이름]! Thank you for being diligent in accomplishing your daily homework. I always enjoy reading your composition because it has substance and it is organized. Just go over my corrections for further improvement. Have a nice day! Stay happy! ~Kelly^^ There are many transformations in the world: car, train, bicycle, etc. >> There are different modes of transportation in the world such as cars, trains, bicycles, etc.  Actually, if we ride a bicycle or car or train dangerously, the possibility of occuring accidents will be higher. >> Actually, if we ride a bicycle, a car or a train dangerously, the possibility of accident will be higher. So, we should utilize those transformations precauciously. >> So, we should utilize those transporation system precauciously. Of the many transportations, nevertheless, I strongly believe that a car is the most dangerous. >> Correct. First of all, In practice, the car accidents more often occur than other transportations and there are the most casualities from car accidents. >> First of all, car accidents occur more often than other forms of transportation and there are the most casualities from car accidents. We can see the news of car accidents more often than any other transportations; almost every day, car accidents occured, I think.>> We can see from the news that car accidents happen almost everyday compared to other forms of transportation.  Secondly, The reason for this is that bicycle cannot speed up as fast as a car while a car is easy to speed up. >> Secondly, The reason for this is that a bicycle cannot speed up as fast as a car while a car is easy to speed up. In addition, train or plain is not operated by drunken people, but a car can be control by the drunken; so, it makes the possibility of car accidents higher. >> In addition, a train or a plain cannot be operated by drunken people, but a car can be controlled by drunken men; so, the possibility of car accidents is higher.For those of two reasons, I think that the most risky transportation is a car >> For those two reasons, I think that the most dangerous mode transportation is a car.