What do you think is the most dangerous sport?
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I think almost of sports is dangerous. I have learned how to snow board with my family.
Someday when I went snowboarding, I took a break time. At that time, a skiing boy ran towards me while I was sitting on the slope.
So my ribs was broken.
because of my experience I feel snowboard is the most dangerous sport. Nevertheless that is exciting.
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Hi, Miss [이름]su!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
I think almost of sports is dangerous.
>> I think almost all sports are dangerous.
I have learned how to snow board with my family.
>> CORRECT!
Someday when I went snowboarding, I took a break time.
>> Someday when I went snowboarding, I took a break at that time.
At that time, a skiing boy ran towards me while I was sitting on the slope.
>> CORRECT!
So my ribs was broken.
>> So my ribs were broken.
because of my experience I feel snowboard is the most dangerous sport.
>> Because of my experience, I felt that snowboarding is the most dangerous sport.
Nevertheless, that is exciting.
>> CORRECT!
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