What do you think is the most important home appliance? Why?
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I think the most home appliances is fridge because fridge is the food those not spoil.
So fridge is very most home appliances.
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What do you think is the most important home appliance? Why?
I think the most home appliances is fridge because fridge is the food those not spoil.
>> I think the most important home appliance is the fridge because it will save food from spoiling.
So fridge is very most home appliances.
>> So the fridge is the most important home appliance.
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