What do you think is the most important part of the body?
학생이 쓴 원문
My most important of my body is my head.
Beacause it\'s very important for us.
And second is our hand.
Beacause it\'s if we don\'t have a hand ,
We can\'t do anything ether.
Thses are our most important thing of my body.
강사 첨삭
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My most important of my body is my head.
Beacause it\'s very important for us.
And second is our hand.
Beacause it\'s if we don\'t have a hand ,
We can\'t do anything ether.
Thses are our most important thing of my body.
Beacause it\'s very important for us.
And second is our hand.
Beacause it\'s if we don\'t have a hand ,
We can\'t do anything ether.
Thses are our most important thing of my body.
>> The first most important part of my body is my head because it\'s very important for us. And second is our hand because if we don\'t have a hand, we can\'t hold anything. These are my most important parts of my body.
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