What do you think is the most important subject? Explain your answer.
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What do you think is the most important subject? Explain your answer.
I think that the most importatn subject is learned in English for me.
I am trying to spend more time for studying English than now.
But it is hard to study in my spare time.
I have to work and go to the gym every day.
That\'s why I usually study in English to use get off work time in subway.
Everyday I should need to study in English regulary.
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Hi [이름]! ^^
People overwhelmingly say math has been the most valuable subject in their lives, with English and science essentially tied for second. All subjects are important still. :)
I think that the most importatn subject is learned in English for me.
>>I think the most important subject to be learned is English.
I am trying to spend more time for studying English than now.
>>I am trying to spend more time in studying English than before.
But it is hard to study in my spare time.
>> But it is hard to study during my spare time.
I have to work and go to the gym every day.
>> CORRECT
That\'s why I usually study in English to use get off work time in subway.
>> That\'s why I usually study in English in the subway when I get off of work.
Everyday I should need to study in English regulary.
>> I should study English regularly.
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