What do you think is the most important thing about community?
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I think that \'open mind\' is the most important in communication with other person.
2. When I communicate with other people , I feel that the second most important thing is sympathize with the person who I talk to.
3. I think the third most important thing in communication is \'listening\' the person who talk to me.
강사 첨삭
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Thank you for your effort in doing your homework. You have great thoughts and I\'m happy to read every time. Keep on expressing your ideas. ^_^
I think that \'open mind\' is the most important in communication with other person.
>>>I think that having an \'open mind\' is the most important in communication with other people.
When I communicate with other people , I feel that the second most important thing is sympathize with the person who I talk to.
>>> When I communicate with other people, I feel that the second most important thing is to sympathize with the person whom I\'m talking to.
I think the third most important thing in communication is \'listening\' the person who talk to me.
>>> I think the third most important thing in communication is \'listening\' to the person who is talking to me.
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