What do you think is the most important thing in a celebration?
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The most important thing in a celebration is not to forget the special day like birthday, wedding anniversary, parents’ day, etc.
>> Correct!
>> Better: The most important thing in a celebration is not to forget the special days like birthday, wedding anniversary, parents\'day, etc.
Celebration doesn’t have to be a huge event, nor reserved for the biggest events or holidays of the year though.
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Because the majority of our days are spent doing trivial tasks like working or cleaning our homes, we all need things to look forward to.
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Celebration can happen for a variety of informal reasons.
>> Celebration can happen for variety of informal reasons.
So, let’s celebrate even a small occasion.
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We do not need to spend a lot of money.
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All we need is a warm heart with just a small gift.
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If you are in a difficult situation finally, it’s just fine without a gift.
>> If you are in a difficult situation, it\'s just fine without a gift,
Your presence itself could be a great gift for the celebration.
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>> OR: Your presence itself could be a great gift for the celebrator.
We can invite our friends and relatives and share the joy of excitement.
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>> OR: We can invite our friends, relatives and share the joy of excitement with them.
Celebration is the thing that everyone should take time for.
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Celebration adds an excitement and a lot of fun to life.
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There is something deep inside humanity that loves to celebrate the best things in life.
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