What do you think is the most important thing to consider when choosing a hobby that is good for us?
학생이 쓴 원문
When somebody want to choice hobbies, he or she must consider somethings before starting.
It should be fully discussed with advanced people as possible.
They are exercising period in sports, cost with equipment if need and to be alone or together.
First, the training center for sports should be closed with my house for a long enjoying.
Second, It will be more better if they are together with mate or wife.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Ethan!
Thank you for submitting your answer and for expressing your thoughts about it.
I also agree that enjoying our hobbies with someone is more enjoyable than doing it alone.
Let\'s keep on enjoying our hobbies! ^^
By the way, you can also take note of this since people usually gets confused with choice and choose.
\'Choice\' is actually a noun while \'choose\' is the verb form.
If we will use them in a sentence, it will be: I will choose a choice. = I will choose my decision.
There you go, have a good night! ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> When somebody wants to choose hobbies, he or she must consider some things before starting.
It should be fully discussed with advanced people as possible.
It should be fully discussed with advanced people as possible.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: There must have been a complete consultation with a professional as possible.
They are exercising period in sports, cost with equipment if need and to be alone or together.
They are exercising period in sports, cost with equipment if need and to be alone or together.
>> There are exercising periods in sports, cost of equipment if needed and if it is alone or together.
First, the training center for sports should be closed with my house for a long enjoying.
First, the training center for sports should be closed with my house for a long enjoying.
>> First, the training center for sports should be closes to my house for a long time enjoyment.
Second, It will be more better if they are together with mate or wife.
Second, It will be more better if they are together with mate or wife.
>> CORRECT.
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