What do you think is the most important thing to have a good social relationship with other people?

2022-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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I thought about this question for a long time. A good social relationship is very important for people. It gives a strong influence to someone\'s life. So I think it will help to have it keeping in touch with good people. I usually try to keep in touch with good people through SNS or on the phone. Saying hello is a good way to get someone\'s mind. So try to keep in touch with someone who is good and important for you. And I also think it is necessery to have a sense. Trying to catch the mood of situation is helpful to give a nice impression for other people.

강사 첨삭

Hi Arissa, 

Thank you for submitting your thoughts on this question. 
I agree that keeping in touch with good people is important in having or keeping a good relationship.
I think it is a nice way of showing sincerity and care towards another person. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina

I thought about this question for a long time. A good social relationship is very important for people. It gives a strong influence to someone\'s life. So I think it will help to have it keeping in touch with good people. I usually try to keep in touch with good people through SNS or on the phone. Saying hello is a good way to get someone\'s mind. So try to keep in touch with someone who is good and important for you. And I also think it is necessery to have a sense. Trying to catch the mood of situation is helpful to give a nice impression for other people.

>> I thought about this question for a long time. A good social relationship is very important for people. It has a strong influence on someone\'s life. So I think it will help to keep in touch with good people. I usually try to keep in touch with good people through SNS or phone. Saying hello is a good way to get someone\'s mind. So try to keep in touch with someone good and important to you. And I also think it is necessary to have a sense. Trying to catch the situation\'s mood helps give other people a nice impression.


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