What do you think is the most important thing to have a happy family? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it is the most important thing that Familly understand and consider each other. And I might think that the role of parent also have a effect on a happy family. I want to talk about more, but I have to go on a sleep. Because tomorrow is graduation. I must wake up early. haha Good night~
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
Thanks for sharing this one.
It\'s okay. Maybe you can tell me more of your ideas later.
Enjoy the graduation. See you later!
~T. Jessie~
I think it is the most important thing that Familly understand and consider each other.
>> I think the most important thing that a family should do is to understand and consider each other.
And I might think that the role of parent also have a effect on a happy family.
>> And I think that the role of parents also has an effect to a happy family.
I want to talk about more, but I have to go on a sleep.
>> I want to talk about it more, but I have to go to sleep.
Because tomorrow is graduation.
>> Correct!
I must wake up early. haha
>> Correct!
Good night~
>> Correct!
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