What do you think is the most important thing to have a happy family? Why?

2015-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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I think it is the most important thing that Familly understand and consider each other. And I might think that the role of parent also have a effect on a happy family. I want to talk about more, but I have to go on a sleep. Because tomorrow is graduation. I must wake up early. haha Good night~

강사 첨삭

  Good morning! Thanks for sharing this one. It\'s okay. Maybe you can tell me more of your ideas later. Enjoy the graduation. See you later! ~T. Jessie~ I think it is the most important thing that Familly understand and consider each other. >> I think the most important thing that a family should do is to understand and consider each other. And I might think that the role of parent also have a effect on a happy family. >> And I think that the role of parents also has an effect to a happy family. I want to talk about more, but I have to go on a sleep. >> I want to talk about it more, but I have to go to  sleep. Because tomorrow is graduation. >> Correct! I must wake up early. haha >> Correct! Good night~ >> Correct!

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