What do you think is the most important thing to make a happy family?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it is love and respect. Because to love and respect each other, we can make a trust in family and we don\'t need to fight with them. Loving each other is very important to grow their children and respecting each other is we can give a advice and listen their opinion. So the love and respect is very important to make a happy family.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daisy!
Thank you for sharing your answer. Love and respect are big words. I hope love and respect will continue to grow in your family. Great job!
~T.Erin
I think it is love and respect.
>>CORRECT
Because to love and respect each other,
>>CORRECT
we can make a trust in family
>>We can build trust in a family
and we don\'t need to fight with them.
>>CORRECT
Loving each other is very important to grow their children, and respecting each other
>>CORRECT
is we can give a advice and listen their opinion.
>>we can give pieces of advice and listen to their opinion.
So the love and respect is very important to make a happy family.
>>So love and respect are very important to make a happy family.
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