What do you think is the most important traffic rule to follow and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Traffic rule is important because of our safety .It is directly related to life..
we must keep the traffic light especially.This moring I saw car accident.
when i see the crash i always think to be caful on driving.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ju Mi! We must obey traffic rules at all times, not just for our own safety but for everyone\'s. ^^ Thank you for finishing your homework. Have a fun day!
~T. Jewel
Traffic rule is important because of our safety .
>>Traffic rules are important for our safety.
It is directly related to life..
>>It is directly related to our lives.
we must keep the traffic light especially.
we must keep the traffic light especially.
>>We must especially obey the traffic lights.
This moring I saw car accident.
>>This morning, I saw a car accident.
when i see the crash i always think to be caful on driving.
when i see the crash i always think to be caful on driving.
>>When I see a crash, I always remind myself to be careful while driving.
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