What do you think is the most practical solution to stop using gadgets too much?
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We use gadgets when we put DIY products together or repair something broken.
>> We use gadgets when we put DIY products together or repairing something that is broken.
There are two ways to stop using gadgets too much.
>> There are two ways to stop on using gadgets too much.
One is to buy finished products instead of DIY products.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: One is to buy finished products instead of buying DIY products.
And the other is to throw away anything once it gets out of order and buy new one.
>> And the another way is to throw away anything once it gets out of order and buy a new one.
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