What do you think is the most serious problem in the world? Why do you think so?

2021-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

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I think is the most serious problem is environment Pollution in the world. In recent years, Diseases have come to us. for example Covid-19. It all started with pollution. So we have to preserve the environment.

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I think is the most serious problem is environment Pollution in the world.
>>I think the most serious problem in the world is the pollution in the environment.

In recent years, Diseases have come to us. for example Covid-19.
>>In recent years, diseases have to us like COVID-19.

It all started with pollution.
>>CORRECT

So we have to preserve the environment.
>>CORRECT

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