What do you think is the perfect age to go to elementary school?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the perfect age to go to elementary school in 8 years old.
Because I think 7 years old play and 8 years old study.
It\'s good playing many times for children.
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What do you think is the perfect age to go to elementary school?
I think the perfect age to go to elementary school in 8 years old.
Because I think 7 years old play and 8 years old study.
>> I think the perfect age to go to elementary school is 8 years old because I think 7-year-old kids still like playing and 8-year-old children can already study.
It\'s good playing many times for children.
>> Playing can be good for children.
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