What do you think is the place that you would never visit?
학생이 쓴 원문
First of all, I don\'t visit places where accommodation is inconvient. and I think safety must be the top prioirty.
I usually read real traveler\'s reviews before I visit the place.
hmm, among the places I have experienced, The China, I don\'t want to visit again. China hygiene was not good, and it was uncomfortable during the period.
강사 첨삭
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Don\'t forget to always consider the articles in your sentences.
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>>First of all, I don\'t visit places where accommodation is inconvenient and I think safety must be the top priority.
I usually read real traveler\'s reviews before I visit the place.
>>I usually read real travelers\' reviews before I visit the place.
hmm, among the places I have experienced, The China, I don\'t want to visit again.
>>Among the places I have experienced, China is the place I don\'t want to visit again.
China hygiene was not good, and it was uncomfortable during the period.
>>China\'s hygiene was not good and it was uncomfortable during the period.
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