What do you think is the quickest legal way of making a lot of money?

2016-05-10 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Many people are dreaming of making a lot of money. Some people buy lottery tickets or gamble in casino, which could be the quickest legal way of making big money, although the probability of winning it is extremely low. Talking about more realistic ways, we can run our own business or may invest in the real estate or stock market. Either way doesn’t always guarantee positive outcomes. If we pursue a high return, there is a high risk as well. In the past when the real estate market was booming, even ordinary people made quite big money by buying and selling houses or apartments. When the global economy was at its peak in 1980’s, people easily made a fortune. However, it isn’t easy for an individual to make big money these days because of economic recession all over the world. Money makes money. In order to make big money, you need a certain amount of seed money. However most ordinary people don’t have extra money to invest because they have to live from hand to mouth.

강사 첨삭

Perfect composition Sir [이름]!

Happy Tuesday. ^^

I agree with you that there are people who live from hand to mouth.

I also experienced living with them before.
It was during our immersion in Nursing.
I was able to know how difficult life is,

We should be grateful for what we have.

Have a great day. See you in class.

Teacher Nina


Many people are dreaming of making a lot of money.

>> correct

Some people buy lottery tickets or gamble in casino, which could be the quickest legal way of making big money, although the probability of winning it is extremely low.

>> correct

Talking about more realistic ways, we can run our own business or may invest in the real estate or stock market.

>> correct

Either way doesn’t always guarantee positive outcomes.

>> correct

If we pursue a high return, there is a high risk as well.

>> correct

In the past when the real estate market was booming, even ordinary people made quite big money by buying and selling houses or apartments.

>> correct

When the global economy was at its peak in 1980’s, people easily made a fortune.

>> correct

However, it isn’t easy for an individual to make big money these days because of economic recession all over the world.

>> correct

Money makes money.

>> correct

In order to make big money, you need a certain amount of seed money.

>> correct

However most ordinary people don’t have extra money to invest because they have to live from hand to mouth.

>> correct

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