What do you think is the quickest legal way of making a lot of money?
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Perfect composition Sir [이름]!
Happy Tuesday. ^^
I agree with you that there are people who live from hand to mouth.
I also experienced living with them before.
It was during our immersion in Nursing.
I was able to know how difficult life is,
We should be grateful for what we have.
Have a great day. See you in class.
Teacher Nina
Many people are dreaming of making a lot of money.
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Some people buy lottery tickets or gamble in casino, which could be the quickest legal way of making big money, although the probability of winning it is extremely low.
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Talking about more realistic ways, we can run our own business or may invest in the real estate or stock market.
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Either way doesn’t always guarantee positive outcomes.
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If we pursue a high return, there is a high risk as well.
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In the past when the real estate market was booming, even ordinary people made quite big money by buying and selling houses or apartments.
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When the global economy was at its peak in 1980’s, people easily made a fortune.
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However, it isn’t easy for an individual to make big money these days because of economic recession all over the world.
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Money makes money.
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In order to make big money, you need a certain amount of seed money.
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However most ordinary people don’t have extra money to invest because they have to live from hand to mouth.
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