What do you think is the reason behind the global success of K-pop?
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I believe the global success of K-pop stems from its uniqueness, familiarity, and professionalism. Now, most songs are in English to increase global presence. However, most Korean songs were in Korean, which many international audiences find fascinating. Also, unlike some Western pop, which is limited in its variations, K-pop can come in various formats, which piques the interest of foreign listeners. Alongside this, K-pop is familiar to international audiences because many songs draw on Western rhythms. Therefore, many people can enjoy songs even if the lyrics are in languages other than English. Among popular K-pop songs, the sub-genres are hip-hop, EDM, and house music, which are extremely familiar to foreign audiences. Moreover, many K-pop idols are professionals. Even though they debut at a relatively young age, they know how to represent themselves on stage and on social media, which is the result of the structured education provided by K-pop agencies.
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Thank you for this, Aciel!
I believe the global success of K-pop stems from its uniqueness, familiarity, and professionalism.
>>> correct
Now, most songs are in English to increase global presence. >>> correct
However, most Korean songs were in Korean, which many international audiences find fascinating.
>>> correct
Also, unlike some Western pop, which is limited in its variations, K-pop can come in various formats, which piques the interest of foreign listeners.
>>> correct
>>> OR: In contrast to some Western pop that is more limited in style, K-pop offers a wide range of formats that appeal to international audiences.
Alongside this, K-pop is familiar to international audiences because many songs draw on Western rhythms.
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>>> OR: In addition, K-pop feels familiar to international audiences because many songs are influenced by Western rhythms.
Therefore, many people can enjoy songs even if the lyrics are in languages other than English.
>>> correct
Among popular K-pop songs, the sub-genres are hip-hop, EDM, and house music, which are extremely familiar to foreign audiences.
>>> correct
Moreover, many K-pop idols are professionals.
>>> correct
Even though they debut at a relatively young age, they know how to represent themselves on stage and on social media, which is the result of the structured education provided by K-pop agencies.
>>> correct
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