What do you think is the safest way for us to keep our accounts from being hacked?
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I think by using a hard and unique password and try not to tell it to anybody except people who you can believe.
Also, you shouldn\'t use your real name, or birthday because they might actually find you in real life.
And lastly, you should have passwords for the apps that have your information.
Then you are more safer :)
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What do you think is the safest way for us to keep our accounts from being hacked?
I think by using a hard and unique password and try not to tell it to anybody except people who you can believe.
>>> I think by using a hard and unique password can make your accounts safe from being hacked, and try not to tell it to anybody except people you can trust.
Also, you shouldn\'t use your real name, or birthday because they might find you in real life.
>>> CORRECT
And lastly, you should have passwords for the apps that have your information. Then you are more safer.
>>> And lastly, you should have passwords for the apps that have your important information. Then by doing so, you\'ll be a lot safer.
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