what do you think is the worst crime a person could commit?
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I think the worst crime is metal abuse.
Because mental pain can send vitim at death.
Also, It maybe that mental pain can't solve when befor vitim die.
I think dying have many mental pain is sad ending intensely.
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Hello [이름]! I agree with everything you wrote here. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me. See you! ~T. Elisha
I think the worst crime is metal abuse.
>> The worst crime I can think of is mental abuse.
Because mental pain can send vitim at death.
>> Mental pain can send a victim to his death.
Also, It maybe that mental pain can\'t solve when befor vitim die.
>> Mental pain can\'t be solved before the victim\'s death.
I think dying have many mental pain is sad ending intensely.
>> I think dying due to mental pain is an intensely sad ending.
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