what do you think is the worst crime a person could commit?

2019-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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I think the worst crime is metal abuse. Because mental pain can send vitim at death. Also, It maybe that mental pain can't solve when befor vitim die. I think dying have many mental pain is sad ending intensely.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! I agree with everything you wrote here. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me. See you! ~T. Elisha

I think the worst crime is metal abuse.

>> The worst crime I can think of is mental abuse.
 Because mental pain can send vitim at death.

>> Mental pain can send a victim to his death.
 Also, It maybe that mental pain can\'t solve when befor vitim die.

>> Mental pain can\'t be solved before the victim\'s death.
 I think dying have many mental pain is sad ending intensely.

>> I think dying due to mental pain is an intensely sad ending.

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