What do you think is the worst disease? Why?
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I think the worst disease i experinced is a cold. Because the flu was continued very long time in my case. Especially I always have a cold in a every winter season. And I suffered from a cold almosts a month. It was very painful... But sometimes the flu is helpful too. Because I don't need to work. however I don't want to have a cold.
How about you jessie? The korea's weather is ok? Did you have a cold?
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
Thanks for sharing this to me.
Yes, I did have colds. I also hate it but sometimes I like it because it makes my voice different. Hahaha^_^
Anyway, it\'s getting colder and colder here in the Philippines but it\'s not as cold as Korea. So I\'m still grateful.
Well, let\'s continue talking later. See you!
~T. Jessie~
I think the worst disease i experinced is a cold.
>> I think the worst disease I experienced is a cold.
Because the flu was continued very long time in my case.
>> Because when I have a flu, it continues for a very long time.
Especially I always have a cold in a every winter season.
>> Most especially that I always have a cold every winter season.
And I suffered from a cold almosts a month.
>> And I suffered from a cold for almost a month.
It was very painful...
>> Correct!
But sometimes the flu is helpful too.
>> Correct!
Because I don\'t need to work.
>> Correct!
however I don\'t want to have a cold.
>> However I don\'t want to have a cold.
How about you jessie?
>> How about you Jessie?
The korea\'s weather is ok?
>> Do you mean: Is Korea\'s weather okay?
Did you have a cold?
>> Correct!
Thanks for sharing this to me.
Yes, I did have colds. I also hate it but sometimes I like it because it makes my voice different. Hahaha^_^
Anyway, it\'s getting colder and colder here in the Philippines but it\'s not as cold as Korea. So I\'m still grateful.
Well, let\'s continue talking later. See you!
~T. Jessie~
I think the worst disease i experinced is a cold.
>> I think the worst disease I experienced is a cold.
Because the flu was continued very long time in my case.
>> Because when I have a flu, it continues for a very long time.
Especially I always have a cold in a every winter season.
>> Most especially that I always have a cold every winter season.
And I suffered from a cold almosts a month.
>> And I suffered from a cold for almost a month.
It was very painful...
>> Correct!
But sometimes the flu is helpful too.
>> Correct!
Because I don\'t need to work.
>> Correct!
however I don\'t want to have a cold.
>> However I don\'t want to have a cold.
How about you jessie?
>> How about you Jessie?
The korea\'s weather is ok?
>> Do you mean: Is Korea\'s weather okay?
Did you have a cold?
>> Correct!
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