What do you think is the worst invention ever and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, guns, bombs, and other weapons are the worst invention ever.
I can\'t know the exact purpose of those weapons, but nowadays, people are killing one another with those weapons.
Because of these things, people who don\'t have any faults are dying.
And we shouldn\'t make these kinds of circumstances.
That\'s why I think the weapons such as guns, and bombs are the worst invention to the humans.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]:)
I heard from one of my students that the inventor of bombs didn\'t intend to make it to kill other people, but to use it for mining. So, there are different usages for these weapons but people use it for violence. Many innocent people are greatly affected by this.
In my opinion, guns, bombs, and other weapons are the worst invention ever.
>>In my opinion, guns, bombs, and other weapons are the worst inventions ever.
I can\'t know the exact purpose of those weapons, but nowadays, people are killing one another with those weapons.
>> I know the exact purpose of those weapons, but nowadays, people are using it to kill one another.
Because of these things, people who don\'t have any faults are dying.
>> Because of these things, many people become victims.
And we shouldn\'t make these kinds of circumstances.
>> CORRECT
That\'s why I think the weapons such as guns, and bombs are the worst invention to the humans.
>> That\'s why I think the weapons such as guns, and bombs are the worst invention by humans.
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