What do you think is the worst month among the old Korean people? Why?
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I think a worst month is January or February among the old Korean people.
First, because it is very cold.
Second, the road is slippery, so it is hard to walk.
So they shouldn\'t go out as possible.
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What do you think is the worst month among the old Korean people? Why?
I think a worst month is January or February among the old Korean people.
>> I think the worst month among the old Korean people is January or February.
First, because it is very cold.
>> First, it\'s very cold.
Second, the road is slippery, so it is hard to walk.
>> OR: Second, the road is slippery, which makes it difficult to walk.
So they shouldn\'t go out as possible.
>> So they shouldn\'t go out as much as possible.
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