What do you think is the worst sleeping disorder?
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Well, to my eye, an insomnia is the worst sleeping disorder. I\'ve never experienced that before. When I heard about it from other people who are around me, it sounds like terrible. My body is tired, exhausted and could use a good night\'s sleep, but my mental doesn\'t work. And another thing is a somnambulism. Because while I sleep, no one knows what is going to happen even you.
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Well, to my eye, an insomnia is the worst sleeping disorder.
>> Well, to my eye, insomnia is the worst sleeping disorder.
I\'ve never experienced that before.
>> CORRECT!When I heard about it from other people who are around me, it sounds like terrible.
>> When I heard about it from other people who are around me, it sounds terrible.
My body is tired, exhausted and could use a good night\'s sleep, but my mental doesn\'t work.
>> My body is tired, exhausted and could use a good night\'s sleep, but my mind doesn\'t work.
And another thing is a somnambulism.
>> CORRECT!Because while I sleep, no one knows what is going to happen even you.
>> CORRECT!
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