What do you think is the worst sport ever created? Why?
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I think the worst sport is throwing spear because spear is a weapon so it is dangerous.
But I don\'t hate throwing spear because it is one of sports.
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What do you think is the worst sport ever created? Why?
I think the worst sport is throwing spear because spear is a weapon so it is dangerous.
>>> I think the worst sport is the javelin throw because a spear is a weapon so it is dangerous.
But I don\'t hate throwing spear because it is one of sports.
>>> But I don\'t hate javelin throw because it is one of the official sports.
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