What do you think is you best asset? Answer in 5 to 10 sentences.

2019-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

학생이 쓴 원문

The Asset can be a material things and also can be a spiritual character as well. Fortunately and gratefully, I have a plenty of belongings, but in this time, I would like to write about my personality. I have a strong point and I\'m surely like this trait. I can find really well other people\'s abilities. Some people can explain about some topic very well, and another can hear the opinion of different people wonderfully. Someone can do well knitting and somebody is a nice cooker. Every people have their own advantages and lovely points even though they have some disadvantage. I think the most important thing in treating others is finding their strength, and I can do it very well.

강사 첨삭

Hello Su ^^


Thank you for doing your composition.


T. Lainey <\",)))><


The Asset can be a material things and also can be a spiritual character as well.

>>> An asset can be material or a spiritual character.


 Fortunately and gratefully, I have a plenty of belongings, but in this time, I would like to write about my personality.

>>> Fortunately, I have plenty of belongings but this time, I would like to write about my personality.


 I have a strong point and I\'m surely like this trait. I can find really well other people\'s abilities.

>>> I have a strong point and I surely like this trait. I can easily find other people\'s abilities really well.


 Some people can explain about some topic very well, and another can hear the opinion of different people wonderfully.

>>> correct


 Someone can do well knitting and somebody is a nice cooker.

>>> Someone can do well knitting and some can be a very good cook.


 Every people have their own advantages and lovely points even though they have some disadvantage.

>>> Each and everyone of us have our good and bad side.


 I think the most important thing in treating others is finding their strength, and I can do it very well.

>>> correct

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