What do you think is you best asset? Answer in 5 to 10 sentences.
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The Asset can be a material things and also can be a spiritual character as well.
>>> An asset can be material or a spiritual character.
Fortunately and gratefully, I have a plenty of belongings, but in this time, I would like to write about my personality.
>>> Fortunately, I have plenty of belongings but this time, I would like to write about my personality.
I have a strong point and I\'m surely like this trait. I can find really well other people\'s abilities.
>>> I have a strong point and I surely like this trait. I can easily find other people\'s abilities really well.
Some people can explain about some topic very well, and another can hear the opinion of different people wonderfully.
>>> correct
Someone can do well knitting and somebody is a nice cooker.
>>> Someone can do well knitting and some can be a very good cook.
Every people have their own advantages and lovely points even though they have some disadvantage.
>>> Each and everyone of us have our good and bad side.
I think the most important thing in treating others is finding their strength, and I can do it very well.
>>> correct
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