What do you think is your main purpose in life?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think this question is difficult. My main purpose is to be happy with people around me. I want to be happy with people around me because I think being happy makes me solve any problem and bear in any situation. Most of all, I want to see people\'s face which have a big smile. And I want to be a worthy person. I hope that I can be used for society. It is difficult for me to make dreams come true but I want to do my best to make my dreams come true. I\'m looking forward to my future.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kimberly:)
You area worthy person. You make a lot of people happy and inspired. I am one of them. :)
I think this question is difficult.
>> CORRECT
My main purpose is to be happy with people around me.
>> My main purpose is to be happy with the people around me.
I want to be happy with people around me because I think being happy makes me solve any problem and bear in any situation.
>> It is because being happy makes me solve my problems and bear with the situations.
Most of all, I want to see people\'s face which have a big smile.
>> Most of all, I want to see people\'s faces when they have a big smile.
And I want to be a worthy person.
>> CORRECT
I hope that I can be used for society.
>> I hope that I can be used for the society.
It is difficult for me to make dreams come true but I want to do my best to make my dreams come true.
>> It is difficult for me to make my dreams come true but I want to do my best to make it come true.
I\'m looking forward to my future
>> CORRECT
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