What do you think it feels like to fulfill a lifelong ambition?
학생이 쓴 원문
It would can\'t be better happy if I achieve my lifelong ambition. In my case, my lifelong ambition is to live without any lacks so that I can eat delicious foods whenever I want, give presents to someone I love, travel around the world during my free time and live without worry about money. I think it\'s the goal that everyone wants to achieve but it seems like the most difficult goal to fulfill at the same time. I hope I would achieve my ambition and I want to live my happy life with someone that I like and love.
강사 첨삭
Hi, So [이름]!
Thank you for this entry. This is such a wonderful thought. Keep striving and I\'m sure all your efforts will be worth it. ^^
~Elica~
It would can\'t be better happy if I achieve my lifelong ambition.
>>It would be happier if I achieve my lifelong ambition.
In my case, my lifelong ambition is to live without any lacks so that I can eat delicious foods whenever I want, give presents to someone I love, travel around the world during my free time and live without worry about money.
>>In my case, my lifelong ambition is to live without lacking anything so that I can eat delicious food whenever I want, give presents to someone I love, travel around the world during my free time and live without worrying about money.
I think it\'s the goal that everyone wants to achieve but it seems like the most difficult goal to fulfill at the same time.
>>CORRECT
I hope I would achieve my ambition and I want to live my happy life with someone that I like and love.
>>CORRECT
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